whatever happened to dasani?

[Altruist]

Very good closure

i'm sick of using "schizophrenic" as the stock adjective to suggest mental illness around here so i'd like to diversify the options

legit, i hated this at work so i took some time to compiile a list of adequate synonyms for words i use for starting paragraphs

can't address 20 claims of the opposing counsel by just repeating "regarding", "related to", "about", "in response to". it's not a mistake of any kind, but i like my texts to be aesthetic (within the range i see as adequate, not you, lmao)

the key to a good text is abstaining from forming patterns in writing, or at least trying to conceal them

i feel very uncomfortable when i see those dramatic text, whether in journals or social networks, where someone psychotically repeats the start of the sentence 5 times to list irregularities that bother him. just awful writing.

my biggest issue is putting too much text in brackets (i think you told me that once too), makes longer sentences look ugly and borderline readable. but the only alternative to that are footnotes, which arent used in legal proceedings. might as well just start, adds to readability of the text and separating the main ideas from details backing them up

yeah, i think even jsut a healthy injection of new vocabulary could take the discourse here down some unexpected alleys

it's easy to get lazy and start using a small number of words and expressions. i think that's the main reason cursing is considered inappropriate, otherwise people would use them after every 3-4 words, as substitutes for everything